08 Sep

Art by Antonella Fabiani

She has seen too many summers to be completely innocent.

And yet he has made her so.

She is new, pristine, spotless.

She is pure, virtuous, chaste and naive.

She is unsullied, unblemished, undefiled.

She has become a neophyte, a learner, a beginner.

A novice on her first day, her white dress pressed and spotless, the hem gently brushing her bare legs.

She is his pupil, his student, his apprentice, his initiate.

She is his disciple, his follower, his protegé.

She is his slave, his angel, his goddess, his Muse.

In this quiet, holy, secret place, she kneels before him.

Her mind and body are burning.

She is ablaze with desire.

She is thirsty for knowledge.

She aches to learn every rule, every code, every facet, every element, every shade.

Every verse of his dark and decadent religion.

She is hungry for him to instruct her, to teach her, to guide her, to discipline her.

To show her a wild, breathless universe of pleasure and pain.

She wants him to do everything.

She is his.



© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Art by Antonella Fabiani

Originally written by me six years ago and posted a number of times. I hope regular readers can bear another repeat. There is nothing like a beautiful novice.


Posted by on September 8, 2021 in D/s, Erotica, Poetry, romance, Still Life


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7 responses to “Novice

  1. Rahpunzell (@CathyP52264991)

    September 8, 2021 at 4:09 pm

    Yours alone.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. astrosub

    September 8, 2021 at 5:12 pm

    An elegant rendering of the Dominant and sub dynamic.

    Bravo, Monsieur

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Allison Marie Conway

    September 9, 2021 at 10:37 am

    Mercy, this is masterful. Captivating… a beating silence you can feel reverberate all the way through yourself.

    Liked by 1 person


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