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Not poetry

06 May

I have reluctantly realized

thinking of you

and writing your name

in midnight blue ink

on parchment paper

over and over

and over and over

while I whisper

each syllable

does not count

as poetry

though it feels like it

to me.

.

.

© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Not new, and still not poetry

Art by Gianni Strino

 
16 Comments

Posted by on May 6, 2021 in Poetry, romance, Still Life

 

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16 responses to “Not poetry

  1. astrosub

    May 6, 2021 at 2:19 pm

    Written with a cherished fountain pen no doubt

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  2. astrosub

    May 6, 2021 at 6:51 pm

    True but it’s the thoughts that count

    Liked by 1 person

     
  3. libbyhyett

    May 7, 2021 at 1:49 am

    Surprise me

    On Thu, 6 May 2021, 10:10 pm A Faded Romantic’s Notebook, wrote:

    > Romantic Dominant posted: ” I have reluctantly realized thinking of you > and writing your name in midnight blue ink on parchment paper over and over > and over and over while I whisper each syllable does not count as poetry > though it feels like it to me. . . © the auth” >

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  4. In mind and out

    May 7, 2021 at 8:36 am

    I think it might count as poetry?

    Liked by 1 person

     
  5. thereluctantpoet

    May 7, 2021 at 1:37 pm

    Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.

    Liked by 1 person

     

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