You have ruined
my box of words.
None of them
are good enough.
None of them
are adequate.
None of them
can do you justice.
My nouns
are neutered,
my adjectives
are absent,
my verbs
are without value.
I have run out
of metaphors
similes
and superlatives.
You have ruined
my box of words.
How can I
describe you now?
.
.
Β© the author writing as Romantic Dominant
Not new, but probably relevant.
Art by the late Steve Hanks
SCM
January 8, 2021 at 4:45 pm
So lovely…
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Romantic Dominant
January 8, 2021 at 11:03 pm
Smiles Thank you.
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Just_Libby
January 8, 2021 at 6:13 pm
Neutered nouns…. That made me giggle a little
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Romantic Dominant
January 8, 2021 at 11:03 pm
Smiles. Good.
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Belladonna
January 8, 2021 at 6:24 pm
This is so good and different!
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Romantic Dominant
January 8, 2021 at 11:04 pm
Smiles. Too kind.
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ralove4
January 8, 2021 at 6:47 pm
Aahaa!
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Romantic Dominant
January 8, 2021 at 11:04 pm
Smiles.
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Little Charmer
January 8, 2021 at 7:24 pm
I don’t know… But you sure as hell usually succeed! ππ€π€
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 11:32 am
Smiles. Thank you.
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Little Charmer
January 9, 2021 at 8:16 pm
Welcome as always π€
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 11:40 pm
Smiles
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Little Charmer
January 10, 2021 at 2:17 am
ππ€
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House of Heart
January 8, 2021 at 9:33 pm
Reblogged this on House of Heart.
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House of Heart
January 8, 2021 at 9:34 pm
So awesome!
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Romantic Dominant
January 8, 2021 at 11:05 pm
You are much too generous and kind. Thank you. Ms. H.
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House of Heart
January 9, 2021 at 12:46 am
Not at all, I simply love this poem and the art. You are a quite brilliant and a gifted writer Mr. D.
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 11:30 am
Ah, such praise from such a talent. Thank you Ms. H.
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House of Heart
January 9, 2021 at 11:47 am
Its my pleasure indeed.
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thereluctantpoet
January 9, 2021 at 4:23 am
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 11:31 am
Thank you. Smiles.
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kenneturner
January 9, 2021 at 4:46 am
Reblogged this on Becoming is Superior to Being.
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 11:31 am
Thank you. Smiles.
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Dave Williams
January 9, 2021 at 12:03 pm
Very well done to describe how someone can render you speechless, and words can’t do the job they’re supposed to do.
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 12:06 pm
Smiles. Thank you. Too kind.
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Keith
January 9, 2021 at 2:42 pm
Here courtesy of Holly’s blog. This is well done and builds on a neat metaphor. You mentioned superlatives, but I could see this going in the other direction as well, with a lover who left her cold. Keith
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 3:05 pm
Smiles. Possibly so.
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Resa
January 9, 2021 at 8:05 pm
Amazing!
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Romantic Dominant
January 9, 2021 at 11:40 pm
Smiles. Too kind. Thank you.
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