Desire without release is brutal.
It is a hunger, a longing, a yearning.
It is a constant ache.
It crucifies nights and tortures days. It distracts, confuses, and leaves the senses shredded. It makes concentration challenging and application impossible.
It steals rational thought.
It refuses to allow peace.
It makes every moment urgent, every second restless.
It fidgets with time. It is pure torment.
Desire without release is brutal.
But relief, when it comes, is heaven.
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© the author writing as Romantic Dominant
Written a couple of years ago, but desire is always brutal.
Art by Kamille Corry
~M
December 6, 2019 at 2:29 pm
I can very much relate to this. So darn frustrating.
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Romantic Dominant
December 6, 2019 at 4:32 pm
Smiles. Indeed so.
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MysticalKitty
December 6, 2019 at 4:19 pm
How vivid a description of feelings and sensations of such heavy energy…
Beautiful
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Romantic Dominant
December 6, 2019 at 4:35 pm
Thank you. Smiles.
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Allison Marie Conway
December 6, 2019 at 4:35 pm
The timing within your poetry is impeccable. The pace every bit as stirring as the words.
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Romantic Dominant
December 6, 2019 at 4:40 pm
You are more than kind. Thank you.
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In mind and out
December 7, 2019 at 8:21 am
So distracting. So brutal. It’s like pleasure mixed with pain in itself. The poem, too.
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Romantic Dominant
December 7, 2019 at 9:54 am
Ah. Pleasure and pain. Smiles.
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In mind and out
December 7, 2019 at 10:03 am
Yes, both.
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Romantic Dominant
December 7, 2019 at 10:40 am
Smiles
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Monika Vähämäki
December 7, 2019 at 2:42 pm
Yes.. It is..
Den fre 6 dec. 2019 15:31A Faded Romantic’s Notebook skrev:
> Romantic Dominant posted: ” Desire without release is brutal. It is a > hunger, a longing, a yearning. It is a constant ache. It crucifies nights > and tortures days. It distracts, confuses, and leaves the senses shredded. > It makes concentration challenging and ap” >
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Romantic Dominant
December 7, 2019 at 4:22 pm
Smiles
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patti o'malley (@OzoneparkPatti)
December 8, 2019 at 12:15 am
That’s why I comply to it:)
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Romantic Dominant
December 8, 2019 at 12:23 am
Smiles
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