07 May



this feels like

sending a message

in a bottle

hoping it will find

your sea

your shore

your hands

your eyes

your heart

your soul

yet knowing

the odds against

it reaching you

are infinite.



© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Not new. Sighs. The improbability of messages in bottles.

Art by Sarah Fecteau



Posted by on May 7, 2019 in Poetry, Still Life


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2 responses to “Odds

  1. amberangst

    May 7, 2019 at 10:17 pm

    But yet messages in bottles are so romantic … until you realize the message is not meant for you.

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