It would make you angry
my not writing
just because
you are gone.
You were the one
who so often
encouraged me
inspired me
pushed me
roused me
applauded me.
You who were the one
who always
expected more
who insisted
‘you are a better writer
than you believe’.
Even on different paths
in recent years
your first question
‘what are you writing?’
your firmest advice
‘write about everything’.
It would make you angry
my not writing
just because
you are gone.
You would not see
my sorrow
at your passing
as a worthy excuse.
.
.
© the author writing as Romantic Dominant
I wrote this year last year on the death of a close friend and mentor. Almost on the anniversary I learnt a few days ago of the passing of another friend, not nearly so close, but a friendship that goes back to our teens. A sense of great sorrow. It is a reminder of one’s own mortality when our friends die. Especially when they die before their time.
Art by Anne Magill
veveheart
February 2, 2019 at 3:02 pm
I could have written this myself. My one, self published poetry book, is filled with what I wrote because of him. I am grateful I was able to give a copy to him. He loved my poems and encouraged me. I haven’t been able to rouse that passion he brought to my words since his passing. Kindred spirits.
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Romantic Dominant
February 2, 2019 at 5:48 pm
Yet we owe it to the departed. Smiles
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patti o'malley (@OzoneparkPatti)
February 2, 2019 at 6:36 pm
Very sincere condolences for your losses. Your poem, so sad, such sadness and so beautiful. How can something so raw and dark be beautiful at the same time.Only a true poet, and that you are
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Romantic Dominant
February 3, 2019 at 12:02 am
Smiles. You are too kind. Thank you
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scribblingscrabbler
February 2, 2019 at 6:49 pm
That “you” wud forever live in ur words… passionate & lively ❣️
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Romantic Dominant
February 3, 2019 at 12:02 am
Smiles. Thank you.
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AdnamaMarais.wordpress.com
February 2, 2019 at 6:58 pm
Quite right. 😉❤
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Romantic Dominant
February 3, 2019 at 12:02 am
Smiles. Indeed.
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dievca
February 3, 2019 at 1:53 pm
If M goes, I would still write. Its a gift he gave to me – the science geek who thought she had no voice. You honor every moment and gift with your writing (and you allow people to take a moment out of the day with your shared gift.) Even with that I am sorry for your loss.
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Romantic Dominant
February 3, 2019 at 6:45 pm
Smiles. Thank you. Appreciated.
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thereluctantpoet
February 4, 2019 at 1:36 am
So sorry for your losses, My Friend!! An amazing poem and a great tribute to one who made you strive to be your best!! Awesome!!! We should all be so fortunate to have a mentor such as yours!!
Thanks so much for sharing this!!!
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Romantic Dominant
February 4, 2019 at 8:05 am
Smiles. Thank you. Deeply appreciated.
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thereluctantpoet
February 4, 2019 at 1:39 am
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Do Not Miss This Awesome Tribute To A Writer’s Mentor!!
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Romantic Dominant
February 4, 2019 at 8:06 am
Thank you. Smiles.
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inhiscare753
February 4, 2019 at 12:42 pm
Such a beautifully written tribute.
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Romantic Dominant
February 4, 2019 at 1:31 pm
Smiles. Thank you.
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inhiscare753
February 4, 2019 at 7:14 pm
🤗🙏💜
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