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Maybe somewhere

05 Jun

 

Maybe

you are out there

somewhere.

 

Maybe

somewhere close

beyond fields

and trees

roads and cities

valleys and streams.

 

Maybe

somewhere far

beyond borders

and flags

mountains and lakes

continents and seas.

 

Maybe

somewhere

beneath

different skies

in a different land

with a different tongue

and a different skin.

.

Maybe

you are out there

somewhere.

 

Maybe

you are out there

somewhere

waiting

for me.

.

.

© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Painting by Marc Figueras

 
17 Comments

Posted by on June 5, 2018 in Poetry, Still Life

 

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17 responses to “Maybe somewhere

  1. Romina

    June 5, 2018 at 4:28 pm

    Wow! I love this.

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  2. Dil Se

    June 6, 2018 at 2:24 am

    Lovely.

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  3. thereluctantpoet

    June 6, 2018 at 11:45 am

    Oooh, I loved this piece! Your words so eloquently captured the emotion of the title. Loved the title. Maybe Somewhere – are such “wondering words” that conjure up so many images, like the ones you shared with us! Your words just took us with you in your “wondering” and it was so great!

    Really loved your line –
    “Maybe
    somewhere
    beneath
    different skies”

    Really puts new thoughts into “Somewhere”! We don’t always think or remember that the skies in the Southern half of the world are different than what we see in the northern part. A delightful surprise thought.

    Love the whole topic of wistful words and thinking. Don’t know if you have read the reblog I posted recently on this topic? It was wonderful if you care to take a peek – “Someday and the Power of Now” – https://thereluctantpoetweb.wordpress.com/2018/05/31/someday-and-the-power-of-now/

    I would love to see you write a sequel to this wonderful poem, in the same vein – “Perhaps . . . Someday” I’m really loving your work!!!
    Chuck

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    • Romantic Dominant

      June 6, 2018 at 1:16 pm

      Smiles. Yes. It is a lovely piece. I hadn’t seen it.
      I am glad you are enjoying.

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  4. thereluctantpoet

    June 7, 2018 at 2:56 am

    Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Come and imagine with the yearning and wistful words of – MAYBE SOMEWHERE

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  5. Romantic Dominant

    June 7, 2018 at 12:55 pm

    The Militant Negro has stolen my this post and posted it on his own sad little site. He blatantly steals others and is happy to announce the fact that he breaches copyright. He is a nasty little shit and does not deserve the respect that the word negro conveys.

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  6. DADDY'S LIL PRINCESS

    June 7, 2018 at 12:55 pm

    I’m sure she is, lucky you, lucky her

    Liked by 1 person

     

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