Between my lines

21 Feb



I wonder

if you can feel

the ache in my words

the desire in my sentences

the sex in my poetry.


I wonder

if you can feel

the you

between my lines.



Written a year ago. I still like it. Can you feel it?


© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Art by Francine van Hove



Posted by on February 21, 2018 in Poetry, Still Life


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10 responses to “Between my lines

  1. Array

    February 21, 2018 at 6:07 pm

    Yes I can feel it. And I love it

    Liked by 1 person

  2. gracefulphrase

    February 21, 2018 at 7:34 pm

    Whoever the ‘you’ is in this piece is i’m sure feeling it quite deeply.. Beautiful words

    Liked by 2 people

  3. moonbug2013

    February 21, 2018 at 8:56 pm

    This makes me smile. Thank you 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. liefladee

    February 22, 2018 at 1:15 am

    I wonder if she’s real?
    The magic of words and hearts. Dreamy. : )

    Liked by 2 people

  5. liefladee

    February 22, 2018 at 7:13 pm

    : )


  6. operalover1974

    March 16, 2018 at 12:39 am

    I feel it.

    Liked by 1 person


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