I whispered more
than your name
last night
before finally
I slept.
I whispered more
than your name
last night,
bravely
into the dark,
like a poem
like a prayer.
I whispered more
than your name
last night,
hoping the soft
seeking syllables,
the wishing
wanting words
would somehow
reach you
and touch you
deep.
I whispered more
than your name
last night.
Perhaps
you didn’t hear.
.
.
© the author writing as Romantic Dominant
Art by Amy Judd
ladymd1
May 25, 2017 at 5:53 pm
So wonderfully lyrical, it played like a song in my mind.
The flow and imagery are just stunning.
It’s floats like a beautiful ballerina across an open stage.
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Romantic Dominant
May 25, 2017 at 10:53 pm
You are too kind. Thank you.
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redklwr2006 Kym
May 25, 2017 at 11:31 pm
Beautiful
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Romantic Dominant
May 25, 2017 at 11:33 pm
Thank you. Smiles.
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riambra
May 26, 2017 at 2:58 am
The whispered words, the name softly spoken in shadow and dark, fell not upon deaf ears. The silken call stirs me from my slumber, draws me forward, entranced. I am Darkness, I am Night, the Shadows my refuge, where I am shrouded from sight. But whisper my name into that velvet gloom and I shall hear. Awaken me from my little death.
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Romantic Dominant
May 26, 2017 at 8:05 am
Smiles. Wonderfully poetic. Thank you.
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riambra
May 26, 2017 at 12:30 pm
You spark a touch of creativity within me, one I have not felt for a while. Thank you.
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Romantic Dominant
May 26, 2017 at 2:38 pm
To inspire is a joy.
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riambra
May 26, 2017 at 3:45 pm
I am glad that I gave you a bit of joy
*smiles*
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Romantic Dominant
May 26, 2017 at 3:58 pm
Smiles.
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Purpleanais
June 8, 2017 at 8:34 am
This is lovely
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Romantic Dominant
June 8, 2017 at 12:09 pm
Thank you. Smiles.
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