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You make them special

16 Mar

 

I imagine you reading

the dull

and tedious lines

I have written.

Your perfect mouth

forming the words

making them special

beautiful and pure

as they touch you.

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© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Art by Fabian Perez

 
8 Comments

Posted by on March 16, 2017 in Poetry, Still Life

 

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8 responses to “You make them special

  1. April

    March 16, 2017 at 7:07 pm

    Your words about “fingertips touching as the train leaves the station,” were not tedious at all. They, infact, stole my breath away. One of my favorite tweets, aphorisms, of yours…truly. I could feel the spark and the melancholy and the lurching movement of the train. I could hear the whistle of the train and the sound of the breaks being released. Wonderful.

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  2. camc1105

    March 16, 2017 at 7:27 pm

    I really like how simple this is. Sometimes less is more. Great work!

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  3. Elisa Paradis

    March 16, 2017 at 8:23 pm

    always in a perfect timing! Thank you Sir! I dared to communicate my truth because of your lines.

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  4. Purpleanais

    March 17, 2017 at 11:24 pm

    Nicely done

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