03 Sep

Art by Antonella Fabiani

She has seen too many summers to be completely innocent.

And yet he has made her so.

She is new, pristine, spotless.

She is pure, virtuous, chaste and naive.

She is unsullied, unblemished, undefiled.

She has become a neophyte, a learner, a beginner.

A novice on her first day, her white dress pressed and spotless, the hem gently brushing her bare legs.

She is his pupil, his student, his apprentice, his initiate.

She is his disciple, his follower, his protegé.

She is his slave, his angel, his goddess, his Muse.

In this quiet, holy, secret place, she kneels before him.

Her mind and body are burning.

She is ablaze with desire.

She is thirsty for knowledge.

She aches to learn every rule, every code, every facet, every element, every shade.

Every verse of his dark and decadent religion.

She is hungry for him to instruct her, to teach her, to guide her, to discipline her.

To show her a wild, breathless universe of pleasure and pain.

She wants him to do everything.

She is his.



© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Art by Antonella Fabiani

Written by me a year ago. I hope regular readers can bear the repeat.


Posted by on September 3, 2016 in D/s, Poetry, Still Life


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17 responses to “Novice

  1. LionAroundWriting

    September 3, 2016 at 7:46 pm

    Wow, passionate and unrelenting ☺

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Heartafire

    September 3, 2016 at 7:54 pm

    Adore, Mr. D.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. teddyhillz

    September 3, 2016 at 9:46 pm

    simply adorable.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. akshayshah21

    September 3, 2016 at 10:50 pm

    Loved your breeze past my blog,I think you’ll love it.
    Cheers 🙂


  5. hisalone2016

    September 3, 2016 at 11:43 pm

    Okay, so how did You read my heart? 😉
    Thank You. I occasionally share something You have written, with my Master. (this will be) He is as moved as I am.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Kay

    September 4, 2016 at 2:45 am


    Liked by 1 person

  7. MysticalKitty

    September 4, 2016 at 3:29 am

    Reblogged this on Journaling my Surrender and commented:
    Reborn in His hands….

    Liked by 1 person

  8. kalopsiakritika

    September 4, 2016 at 7:17 am

    Love this! ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  9. gracefulphrase

    October 22, 2016 at 10:02 am

    I keep returning to this one, for different reasons than you may think. It resonates with me in a unique manner I believe, I enjoy your work very much.

    Liked by 2 people


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