29 Aug

Loui Jover 'bliss'

She has seen too many summers to be completely innocent.

And yet he has made her so.

She is new, pristine, spotless.

She is pure, virtuous, chaste and naive.

She is unsullied, unblemished, undefiled.

She has become a neophyte, a learner, a beginner.

A novice on her first day, her white dress pressed and spotless, the hem gently brushing her bare legs.

She is his pupil, his student, his apprentice, his initiate.

She is his disciple, his follower, his protegé.

She is his slave, his angel, his goddess, his Muse.

In this quiet, holy, secret place, she kneels before him.

Her mind and body are burning.

She is ablaze with desire.

She is thirsty for knowledge.

She aches to learn every rule, every code, every facet, every element, every shade.

Every verse of his dark and decadent religion.

She is hungry for him to instruct her, to teach her, to guide her, to discipline her.

To show her a wild, breathless universe of pleasure and pain.

She wants him to do everything.

She is his.



© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Art by Loui Jover 


Posted by on August 29, 2015 in D/s, Erotica, Still Life


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31 responses to “Novice

  1. gsadiablo

    August 29, 2015 at 6:08 pm

    Put simply: mmph!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. missameliaandsir

    August 29, 2015 at 6:13 pm

    I tremble at the merest thought of the anticipation. Stunning!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. ss

    August 29, 2015 at 7:03 pm

    A hymn. Divine.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. paganwitchroz

    August 29, 2015 at 7:13 pm

    WELL written Dominant. . You out do yourself.. .I can see why women adore you. . Only speaking for myself I could never be a submissive let alone any man’s second thought. . .I am far too unruly and follow no rules, I guess that is why I was ousted out of paradise. 😁

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Ember

    August 29, 2015 at 9:38 pm

    To be owned and adored… Perfection. 💕

    Liked by 1 person

  6. eonserotica

    August 30, 2015 at 3:06 am

    That image! Emphasized perfectly by your words. Who is this artist? Is this one of your own?

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Heartafire

    August 30, 2015 at 3:52 pm

    In my world you might be the novice Mr. D. Smiles. slyly. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  8. redklwr2006 Kym

    September 1, 2015 at 2:04 am

    A gorgeous piece which painted quite the picture within my mind’s eye. I do so love when I can see the words not just as letters

    Liked by 1 person


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