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Over You – reprised

05 Oct

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Over You

.

She caught my eye

She’s something new.

A different dress.

A different shoe.

And now I know

I’m over you.

.

I gave her words

Like I did with you.

A different smile

A different view

And now I know

I’m over you.

.

She broke my heart

Far worse than you.

A different pain

A different blue.

And now I know

I’m over you.

.

.

© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Photo stolen from TomekKarol

This poem is not new. Some will recognise it. I can remember writing it, alone in the depths of winter in a remote, rented cottage on the edge of a small forest in south western England. It was a poem designed to hurt. But I never sent to the girl I wanted to wound. Because I could not be that cruel. It is a simple poem, but I am fond of it.

This was originally posted a year ago – and perhaps once before. But the poem dates back longer.

Originally posted in April 2013

 
20 Comments

Posted by on October 5, 2014 in D/s, Lovers Past, Poetry

 

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20 responses to “Over You – reprised

  1. lesliemeeks

    October 5, 2014 at 6:54 pm

    Can you read the line “Far worse than you” again? I love how you drawl out the word “Far”

    It’s sad as well as it is beautiful…

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  2. Mytwosentences

    October 5, 2014 at 6:55 pm

    Well written.

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  3. Heartafire

    October 5, 2014 at 9:28 pm

    love that voice. Is this fair? “-)

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  4. Mandy the Quiet (@69quietgirl)

    October 5, 2014 at 11:43 pm

    I love this poem and your reading really brings it to life – there’s a very definite rhythm to the words which comes across well in your reading! Thanks for sharing it! 🙂

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  5. n1daba

    October 6, 2014 at 4:56 am

    One can’t get over that voice for sure. 🙂

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  6. Joy

    October 6, 2014 at 5:11 am

    Reblogged this on Butterfly Reborn and commented:
    I love the pain and the hurt in this poem. I also love the little note on why it was never sent to the intended audience. My head is full of unsent poems like this (although way less good).

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  7. marcus

    October 6, 2014 at 6:05 pm

    (((Awhoooo)))

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  8. Cara Thereon

    October 6, 2014 at 6:54 pm

    You’re voice is lovely. Just caress the words.

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  9. redklwr2006 Kym

    October 7, 2014 at 2:32 am

    I do so enjoy when I get to hear your words as you wish them to be heard

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  10. Carole

    January 6, 2015 at 6:18 am

    Reblogged this on Be Uncommon.

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