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Your name

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I spoke your name today.

I tried it in my mouth. I rolled the syllables over my tongue. I tested you upon my lips. I listened to the sound you made.

I imagined whispering softly. Quiet, eloquent poetry. Words of adoration. A gentle instruction. A firm command

I spoke your name today

You tasted like heaven in my mouth

I recited you.

Over and over.

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© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Art by Thomas Saliot

 

 
58 Comments

Posted by on October 23, 2013 in D/s, Poetry, Still Life

 

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58 responses to “Your name

  1. Jonathan Caswell

    October 23, 2013 at 9:58 pm

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    LOVE IN MANY SENSES…!

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  2. bpnana

    October 23, 2013 at 10:12 pm

    That’s a keeper. Cheers!

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  3. sparkles4m

    October 23, 2013 at 10:47 pm

    Very nice.

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  4. JoanneBest

    October 23, 2013 at 11:18 pm

    i’ve never let myself really listen to the spoken word, this time i let myself lean back with closed eyes and i really listened…the words themselves are beautiful, words any woman yearns to hear, incredible perfection (You outdo yourself each time You write), thank You for sharing these words so we can really hear them the way they’re meant to be heard, and in a way that echoes through the mind, playing over and over…gorgeous…

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    • Romantic Dominant

      October 23, 2013 at 11:20 pm

      I am glad you enjoyed them. I am imagining you with your head back and eyes closed …

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      • JoanneBest

        October 23, 2013 at 11:58 pm

        there’s something about the eyes closed that makes the sound that much better. ..

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  5. b.l. ronan

    October 23, 2013 at 11:55 pm

    Such lyrical beauty punctuated in such purposeful articulation. You inspire me to write poetry that makes the strongest impression when it’s whispered.

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  6. Desiree G

    October 24, 2013 at 12:59 am

    I tried it in my mouth …… Sensual and tasty.

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  7. Desires in the Dark

    October 24, 2013 at 2:18 am

    A taste of fine wine, appreciated and enjoyed. Beautiful piece.

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  8. Megan Kay's Blog

    October 24, 2013 at 5:11 am

    *coughMEGANcough*
    Superb… As always… x

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  9. vishalbheeroo

    October 24, 2013 at 7:55 am

    Too beautiful and the best of sensuality:)

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  10. lostgenny

    October 26, 2013 at 8:45 am

    *sigh*

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  11. Master's Slave

    October 26, 2013 at 3:56 pm

    So Lovely, I just wish he really knew my name. xo

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  12. rheath40

    October 30, 2013 at 1:02 am

    I’ve recorded the name of my lover and listened to it on repeat. It sounded like a mantra, prayer, promise, and home….

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  13. wordsweneversaid

    November 3, 2013 at 7:32 am

    There was once a name I would repeat – I would trace it over and over again with my tongue waiting for the day I would be on my knees before him waiting for his word to free me…

    You have a lovely voice – thank you for sharing it.

    M.L.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      November 3, 2013 at 1:22 pm

      Thank you for reading and listening. It is appreciated
      I hope he did not leave you on your knees alone

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      • wordsweneversaid

        November 3, 2013 at 3:45 pm

        We are always alone when we are on our knees – whether in worship or in contemplation…we are in a different place inside ourselves.

        Be well,
        M.L.

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  14. Himani B

    November 7, 2013 at 2:48 am

    So glad I discovered you, your writing is oh-so-lovely!

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  15. embracingsubmission

    November 7, 2013 at 9:24 am

    Wow. Just wow.

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  16. J. Jane MacKinna

    November 19, 2013 at 7:16 am

    If only one could fill a bathtub full of words and bathe in them…

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    • Romantic Dominant

      November 22, 2013 at 7:09 am

      A delicious thought. Show me the bath and the naked bather. Smiles
      Thank you.

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  17. mrmodigliani

    November 24, 2013 at 4:07 pm

    I love your work. You are a kindred spirit in these subjects. May I ask how you link to the Soundcloud player? I thought this could only be done on a self hosted site.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      November 26, 2013 at 10:17 pm

      Thank you.
      Simply record to SoundCloud or upload an audio file.
      Click the share button
      Copy the WordPress link to your post
      Voila

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      • mrmodigliani

        November 27, 2013 at 2:21 am

        Thank you!

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  18. Romantic Dominant

    October 26, 2014 at 7:17 pm

    Reblogged this on A Faded Romantic's Notebook.

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  19. Karin

    October 26, 2014 at 9:35 pm

    I’ve resisted listening to your audio offerings until today. Perhaps because the intimacy of your words was always enough. Perhaps because I just dipped into the Souncloud possibilities today… Your voice adds a dimension to the reading that wasn’t anticipated. It is a most welcome facet to this piece. ~ k

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  20. Heartafire

    October 27, 2014 at 1:13 am

    Reblogged this on Heartafire and commented:
    Beautiful poetry Mr. D.
    Please see the original.

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  21. n1daba

    October 27, 2014 at 1:19 am

    Still in bed with eyes closed… just listening… like a caress to my ear… it feels so good to wake up to your voice.. and then I heard you whisper “Ember…” over and over…. 😉

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  22. busymindthinking

    October 27, 2014 at 1:53 am

    I quite enjoyed reading this piece and the recording with it. Belinda

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  23. johncoyote

    October 27, 2014 at 3:38 pm

    Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. Thank you.

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  24. atlanticadreams

    December 18, 2014 at 10:29 am

    em in love with your recitals.

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  25. justagirllost

    September 30, 2015 at 5:57 am

    Beautiful 🌹
    I always wonder if a name fits a person or a person fits a name?
    Lovely words as always 🙏🏻

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