Not Falter
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He can sense her in every footstep.
Every cracked, grey paving slab,
Every rust-red, crumbling brick,
Every light-filled, laughing window,
Every mocking, welcoming sign.
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He will not bend.
He will not falter.
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He can see her in every stranger.
Every passing, dark hunched shadow,
Every bare-legged, smiling girl.
Every wide-eyed, staring child.
Every joyful, oblivious lover.
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He will not bend.
He will not falter.
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He can feel her in every heartbeat.
Every rapid, strained, urgent breath
Every drum-tight, bursting sinew
Every white-knuckle, clenching fist
Every streaming hot angry tear.
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He must not bend.
He must not falter.
.
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© the author writing as Romantic Dominant
Photo by Roxess
I wrote this in a a spare hour a week or so ago at the request of someone pulling together an anthology under the overall title of ‘Struggle’. It is a rough and ready poem, but it captures a moment in my life.
carolinejuliette
September 23, 2013 at 8:18 pm
Powerful words…
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Romantic Dominant
September 23, 2013 at 10:14 pm
Thank you, sweet Caroline
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JoanneBest
September 23, 2013 at 8:21 pm
beautifully haunting, just like her
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Romantic Dominant
September 23, 2013 at 10:14 pm
Who is ‘her’
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b.l. ronan
September 23, 2013 at 10:21 pm
I love the duality of this piece. That the struggle is up to interpretation. the missing. the pain of remembering. or perhaps the profound loss.
as always power in purposefully penned words.
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Romantic Dominant
September 23, 2013 at 11:08 pm
Thank you. Your praise always delights me.
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lostgenny
September 24, 2013 at 12:16 am
Beautiful and sad. Leaves me with the overwhelming urge to hug someone tight…
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Romantic Dominant
September 24, 2013 at 1:13 pm
Thank you. A hug is always welcome anywhere.
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vishalbheeroo
September 24, 2013 at 3:11 am
amazingly beautiful stanza of love. You make me want to fall in love:)
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Romantic Dominant
September 24, 2013 at 1:13 pm
It must be done at least ten times in your life
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vishalbheeroo
September 24, 2013 at 1:15 pm
hehe! Good one:)
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Chrissy
September 25, 2013 at 7:49 pm
FANTASTIC!
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Romantic Dominant
September 25, 2013 at 11:42 pm
THANK YOU. Smiles
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elfarinarosz
September 25, 2013 at 9:07 pm
powerful piece
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Romantic Dominant
September 25, 2013 at 11:42 pm
Thank you
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