Angel – Ninth Part : Everything

01 Aug


The pin wheel criss-crosses her belly.

The sensation, electric, tingling, sharp, dangerous,  makes the muscles dance beneath her skin. She moans as its stinging path begins to move towards her sex. She tests the bindings that secure her arms above her head. She can twist her upper body but the door at her back limits her movement.  The spreader bar at her ankles keeps her legs parted, immobile, and stops her escaping from the cruel, wonderful spikes.

She wonders momentarily what she is doing here in this anonymous hotel room at the admittedly slender and expert hands of an almost stranger. She only knows him as a poet, a seducer with words, a master of the heart. She has read his dark writings and knew what to expect.

Except that she could never have imagined how she would feel. Naked, vulnerable, aroused, and utterly adored. In a way she had never been before. She feels sensual, decadent, and brave.  She feels like a sacrifice, a goddess, a slave. For as long as this lasts, she will be utterly his and, despite the fear that makes her shiver, she feels strangely safe.

Most of all she feels extraordinarily beautiful.

She gasps as the teeth of the wheel run up and down her thighs. She loses count of the journeys it makes before the pressure softens.  She thinks she knows where it is going next.

There is a silence. Seconds tick away. The air is heavy with expectation, She can barely breathe.

She needs. She aches. Her entire skin is alive with desire.

She knows he will do everything. She wants him to do everything. Everything she has imagined. Everything he has ever written. Everything she has ever dreamed.

She wants … everything.



© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Photo by RothermRebeka

Part OnePart Two.  Part ThreePart Four.  Part Five.  Part Six.  Part Seven.  Part Eight.


Posted by on August 1, 2013 in D/s, Erotica, Lovers Past


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32 responses to “Angel – Ninth Part : Everything

  1. micklively

    August 1, 2013 at 11:42 am

    Great use of the language. I don’t usually go much for BDSM: I think it’s been “done to death” since Fifty Shades, but I think you have something. Good writing always shines through, whatever the genre.


  2. Oloriel

    August 1, 2013 at 12:37 pm

    Like the first commenter, writing like these are something I tend to largely avoid, but you have my liking and attention since I discovered you 🙂


    • Romantic Dominant

      August 1, 2013 at 12:56 pm

      I feel discovered. Like something under a stone? Smiles.
      Thank you. Appreciated.


  3. abbiefoxton

    August 1, 2013 at 1:42 pm

    ‘A sacrifice, a goddess, a slave’ – the deep seed awakens. An exquisite encounter…


  4. Maggie Carpenter

    August 1, 2013 at 2:11 pm

    How you can slip into the heart and mind of a submissive and not just capture her raw emotion, but express her soulful yearnings through the written word, positively takes my breath away.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Robyn Lee

    August 1, 2013 at 4:10 pm

    Very well done!
    You write with compelling style and a distinct finesse. 🙂


  6. rine1873

    August 1, 2013 at 4:36 pm

    Wow this is the first thing I read from you and I loved it. You captured my attention and kept it. Waiting to see what you would do next. Very erotic and captivating.


    • Romantic Dominant

      August 1, 2013 at 4:42 pm

      Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. There is much to do with many options


  7. FrolicMe

    August 1, 2013 at 5:47 pm

    Having read that I feel a new purchase coming on…!


  8. janineyork

    August 19, 2013 at 1:17 am

    Always delving deeper into the dark recesses of my mind. The places I think are mine alone, just for me in the dark still of night to entertain. Just know that I live vicariously through you. You are an amazing writer and your gift of expression and attention to detail are bringing unimagined desires to life. I thank you.


  9. Anna Marie Kenward

    November 17, 2013 at 3:53 pm

    I only discovered your blog today, so have been able to read Parts 1 – 9 in one go. I love it. But it has left me wanting so much more. Is there a part 10 and beyond, or is it to be left to our imaginations what would cum next. (pun intended!). Thank you so much for sharing this with us.


    • Romantic Dominant

      November 17, 2013 at 4:09 pm

      Smiling. Parts 10 and onwards have physically happened in one shape or form on rather more than one occasion over the years. I just haven’t got around to writing them yet. I will do, I’m sure.
      I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reading and commenting.

      Liked by 2 people

  10. Romantic Dominant

    July 17, 2014 at 4:51 pm

    Reblogged this on A Faded Romantic's Notebook and commented:

    Final part


  11. lesliemeeks

    July 17, 2014 at 5:05 pm

    I wish I were her in that moment. It utterly takes my breath away reading this. Where can I purchase one of these pinwheels?


  12. carina

    July 17, 2014 at 5:05 pm

    The whole series has been breathtaking and touching to my soul. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with us.


  13. Heartafire

    July 17, 2014 at 5:50 pm

    It is my pleasure to read this elegant writing! Thank you Mr. D.


  14. georgeforfun

    July 17, 2014 at 7:33 pm

    Reblogged this on georgeforfun.



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