Slow surrender

23 May


She is innocent.

Her bold beauty is barely blemished. Her gorgeous body is almost untouched by another’s breath. The gentle pages of her heart are yet to be written.  Her hunger is new and urgent. She longs for something she has yet to discover.
She has purity in her soul.

He is darkness.

He has loved and won and lost his way through enough joy and sorrow to fill the night. He has coaxed forth endless sweet fantasies, elegantly bestowed a thousand decadent pleasures, administered such breathtaking, delicious torture.
His eyes have seen far beyond the shadows.

Yet there is an ache that binds them. A primeval yearning that sets them apart from all others.

He will sanctify her slow surrender and make them both holy.



© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Photo stolen from Dreaming Out Loud


Posted by on May 23, 2013 in D/s, Erotica


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38 responses to “Slow surrender

  1. carolinejuliette

    May 23, 2013 at 10:02 pm

    Ahhh the lion & the lamb…


  2. thesacredroad

    May 24, 2013 at 1:26 am

    to be so untouched…so fresh….so bright. I’m not sure I ever was. But oh to be in her shoes…..Le sigh.

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  3. Master's Slave

    May 24, 2013 at 2:32 am

    The way you whisper love makes me tremble, enticing my senses, I’m lost in your spell. Say my name and caress my soul with a sensual lullaby, enrapturing my mind in your dark desire.


    • Romantic Dominant

      May 25, 2013 at 3:24 pm

      You always comment with such poetry.


      • Master's Slave

        May 25, 2013 at 4:07 pm

        You are the poetry. made from real life, you create from noun, verb and adjective, giving rebirth to words and thought, giving meaning to what each of us as human seek; we want to feel the passion, to be desired like no other and to give love and to be loved in return. Even if only for a few moments, some of us find it here with you.

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  4. butterflyx3

    May 24, 2013 at 7:08 am

    These words… have gone straight to my heart. Beautiful


  5. vishalbheeroo

    May 24, 2013 at 9:32 am

    Yearning and craving for binds and holds us together:)


  6. JoanneBest

    May 24, 2013 at 2:01 pm

    “He will sanctify her slow surrender and make them both holy.”
    yet another metaphorical death…. breathlessly beautiful


  7. Ranterina (@ranterina)

    May 24, 2013 at 4:51 pm

    it is beautiful. as vivid as faces lighted as vivid as heart those melt.


  8. emmylgant

    May 25, 2013 at 4:52 am

    I can feel the catch in your throat. Beautiful. Dangerous. Irresistible.
    Fais attention


  9. janineyork

    May 26, 2013 at 10:47 pm

    New experiences in trust and love. Your words never fail to move me.


  10. .

    June 1, 2013 at 6:29 pm

    Loved this! It actually explains a situation of mine perfectly. Thank you 🙂


  11. H.S.

    June 13, 2013 at 1:37 pm



    • Romantic Dominant

      June 13, 2013 at 9:10 pm

      Thank you beautiful H


      • H.S.

        June 14, 2013 at 8:27 pm

        Smiles & ..


        • Romantic Dominant

          June 14, 2013 at 9:56 pm

          & ..
          Perhaps heavy with meaning. Perhaps signifying nothing.
          Smiles back.


          • H.S.

            June 23, 2013 at 2:00 pm


            That’s the problem with words. You can never really be sure about them.


            • Romantic Dominant

              June 23, 2013 at 5:30 pm

              I like the blush.

              That is true. I believe mine are so, although others may disagree. Smiles


  12. Aphrodite

    June 29, 2013 at 6:01 pm

    “He will sanctify her slow surrender and make them both holy.” — that is the most beautiful statement I’ve ever heard, and so accurate.


  13. lesliemeeks

    August 22, 2014 at 3:54 pm

    I want to be this girl. To be so untouched and to experience his darkness and desire. Lowers head and sighs!



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