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Flying

22 Jan

carpet surfin'-thomas-saliot

She had flown.

.

He was saddened

she could

take to the air

without him.

.

She was disappointed

at how little

he seemed to care.

.

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© the author writing as Romantic Dominant

Art by Thomas Saliot

 
24 Comments

Posted by on January 22, 2013 in Lovers Past, Still Life

 

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24 responses to “Flying

  1. Amanda

    January 22, 2013 at 3:20 am

    I always enjoy your posts, hope you have a lovely evening!
    A

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  2. thesacredroad

    January 22, 2013 at 3:53 am

    it takes true talent to pack such a powerful punch in such a brevity of words. painful but beautiful. x

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  3. silentlyheardonce

    January 22, 2013 at 6:15 am

    A continuing saga well told.

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  4. Agatha-luise

    January 22, 2013 at 9:06 am

    The last line stanza for me is quite vague. Was she disappointed because she learned he cared so little that she decided to move forward? Or was she disappointed because in the end she learned that despite the fact that she had moved, he seemed not to care about this.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      January 22, 2013 at 8:57 pm

      Neither. Or one or the other. Or both. That is the trouble with poetry. And actually, I’m not sure myself. Smiles.

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  5. sharronkelley

    January 22, 2013 at 2:17 pm

    It’s a strange place. The kind part of us wants life to go on without us; another part of us is a bit sad to know it does.

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  6. butterflyx3

    January 23, 2013 at 8:46 pm

    And yet he wanted her stay…

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    • Romantic Dominant

      January 23, 2013 at 9:50 pm

      In the end … I really don’t know

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      • butterflyx3

        January 23, 2013 at 10:15 pm

        Deep down I think you do, sometimes it is hard to admit. But everything happens for a reason.

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        • Romantic Dominant

          January 23, 2013 at 10:19 pm

          I try to be honest. Especially with myself. And in truth I thought I would suffer. But I have not. And the lack of pain bothers me as much as if my heart had been torn

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          • butterflyx3

            January 23, 2013 at 10:59 pm

            You know what they say ‘If you love something enough, set it free.. if it finds it’s way back to you then it was meant to be’ But if it doesn’t then take it as a learning experience. Sometime we see things more then what they really are, and once they are gone we realize the truth, which hurts.

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            • Romantic Dominant

              January 23, 2013 at 11:02 pm

              You might be right. But it is the lack of hurt (on my part) that hurts – or rather – disturbs. Time for sleep in England. Have fun.

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  7. The Priestess of Q

    January 27, 2013 at 1:46 am

    😦 I truly love this..

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  8. coastalmom

    January 27, 2013 at 2:04 pm

    Inside your writing I have found my heart!

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