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Unworthy

04 Nov

 

I have seen

far too many

tear-stained

pretty girls

in their ruined

party dresses

lose

their submissive

hearts

to callous men

who are not

even worthy

of a smile.

.

.

Photograph stolen from Marina Coric

 
44 Comments

Posted by on November 4, 2012 in D/s, Poetry

 

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44 responses to “Unworthy

  1. Joseph McNamara

    November 4, 2012 at 1:39 pm

    A sentence filled with broken dreams and promise. And a sentence powerfully showing pain and distrust. An cautionary education in word……

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    • Romantic Dominant

      November 4, 2012 at 5:10 pm

      It is an honour to be reblogged. Thank you.

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      • Bad Penny

        November 5, 2012 at 2:28 am

        It was an honor to reblog, Sir! Hope you had a fantastic day!

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        • Romantic Dominant

          November 7, 2012 at 10:03 pm

          Thank you. And to your friend, whomever they may be. I am glad you enjoyed.

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  2. genevievedewey

    November 4, 2012 at 2:28 pm

    I agree, Joseph, I am always amazed at the evocative power of the words in this blog. Thank you for sharing with us!

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  3. Kindred_Hearts

    November 4, 2012 at 2:50 pm

    As a tear stained girl, never sure of the pretty, I made myself a promise to find a Dominant who would cherish my gift.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      November 4, 2012 at 5:11 pm

      I am sure you are more than pretty. And equally certain you will find what you seek.

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  4. Jade Cary

    November 4, 2012 at 3:41 pm

    Short, sweet and very moving. Thank you.

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  5. surrenderedone

    November 4, 2012 at 3:43 pm

    Thank You so much for this. Unworthy is a word that should never fill a submissive’s mind…ever.

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  6. ktz2

    November 4, 2012 at 5:34 pm

    I know this – – I was once one. Thank you for understanding the submissive’s heart.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      November 4, 2012 at 5:40 pm

      I don’t know if I do understand the submissive’s heart. But I know the beauty in her soul.

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  7. Ihsan

    November 5, 2012 at 2:10 am

    A friend directed me here. Your words are captivating. Thank you for sharing. I am glad to have been led here and look forward to reading more ~smiles~

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  8. mlbk7

    November 7, 2012 at 8:30 pm

    Beautiful and haunting. xo M.

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  9. indigosoul7

    November 7, 2012 at 9:35 pm

    Reblogged this on Ramblings of Everything.

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  10. Maggie Carpenter

    November 8, 2012 at 6:05 am

    You took me to a place so long ago – and now written about. Thank you –

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  11. flowersfirst

    November 9, 2012 at 7:28 am

    I suppose even in this lifestyle one must kiss a lot of frogs

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  12. surrenderedone

    November 10, 2012 at 4:39 pm

    I have nominated you for the Liebster Blog Award. Details are here:
    http://surrenderedbychoice.wordpress.com/2012/11/10/first-nomination-thank-you-so-much/

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    • Romantic Dominant

      November 10, 2012 at 6:27 pm

      Thank you so much. I am honoured. However I believe it is for bloggers with less than 200 followers and, surprisingly, I have more. But thanks again.

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  13. ElementalEloquence

    November 21, 2012 at 1:41 pm

    This touched my core. Thank you for finding my blog…now i can follow You.

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  14. Mave

    November 21, 2012 at 10:56 pm

    To be able to express so much emotion in such a short poem is amazing.
    I loved it

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  15. Briarlady

    November 25, 2012 at 7:47 pm

    Sadly – so true….

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  16. texlonghorn72

    January 1, 2013 at 8:09 pm

    it is in the horrendous judgment of another human being as unworthy of even a smile, that a heart has already been broken, he only illuminated the havoc.

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  17. Closetquean

    April 6, 2013 at 9:44 am

    Reblogged this on closetquean.

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  18. Closetquean

    April 6, 2013 at 9:46 am

    Beautifully written….

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  19. hotlilmess

    April 6, 2013 at 11:06 am

    Chilling. True. May every submissive soul read and digest this. Thank you.

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