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But Still

18 Jul

But Still

 

There is a distant echo of your touch

Upon my skin

The faintest of memories

But still

A remembering

Of something soft and special

And intimate and close

And of days when we

Had more than most.

 

The passing years have been less kind

To me than you

These deep cobwebs of age

But still

This desire burns through

To see you dressed in evening clothes

And your blue eyes darkened

And you gliding like a dream

Proudly at my side

 

This tired and quiet heart still quickens

When you are close

Triggered by your body’s scent

But still

It makes me catch my breath

Like no other has ever done

And can ever do again

And I ache for you

The way I did back then.

 

Copyright the author writing as Romantic Dominant

 

Because, despite all my considerable foolishness, she is the first and last and everything in between.

 
20 Comments

Posted by on July 18, 2012 in Poetry, Wears my ring

 

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20 responses to “But Still

  1. Evelyn

    July 18, 2012 at 3:11 am

    Tearful sigh…

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  2. Isabella

    July 18, 2012 at 4:10 am

    This is beautiful.

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  3. D

    July 18, 2012 at 9:21 am

    She should read this.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      July 18, 2012 at 9:54 am

      She has.
      The poem anyway. I’m not sure, in these days of reconciliation, it would be wise to show her the blog.

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  4. eroticexploration

    July 18, 2012 at 4:18 pm

    Very, very moving and beautiful. I’m glad she has read the poem.

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  5. Jennifer Ritchie

    July 20, 2012 at 7:32 pm

    I love this, all the emotions captured so perfectly …

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  6. Ana

    July 23, 2012 at 10:11 pm

    This is beautiful and moving and true.

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  7. loneyheart

    October 26, 2012 at 4:56 pm

    i rember the days when i could say with full honesty that HE TOOK MY BREATH AWAY.
    But as of late i do not feel that same rush of emotions, only empty sadness. And with all of my heart i wish he still left me breathless.

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  8. Charron's Chatter

    November 29, 2012 at 6:10 pm

    goosebumps…

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  9. lesliemeeks

    October 12, 2014 at 11:41 pm

    If your heart still quickens when she is close, then I don’t understand why no compatibility. Have you ever considered introducing her to your dark world?

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