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Over You

16 May

 

Over You

 

She caught my eye

She’s something new.

A different dress

A different shoe.

And now I know

I’m over you.

 

 

I gave her words

Like I did with you.

A different smile

A different view.

And now I know

I’m over you.

 

 

She broke my heart

Far worse than you.

A different pain

A different blue.

And now I know

I’m over you.

 

 

Copyright:  The author writing as Romantic Dominant

This is probably one of the most vicious poems I have ever written.  Simple and cruel. We lash out when we are hurt …

 
21 Comments

Posted by on May 16, 2012 in Lovers Past, Poetry

 

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21 responses to “Over You

  1. A writers strange life.

    May 16, 2012 at 7:40 pm

    This is sad and depressing.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 16, 2012 at 7:43 pm

      Yes

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  2. eroticexploration

    May 16, 2012 at 8:23 pm

    Oooh very sad, stirs sorrowful memories for me too…

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 16, 2012 at 9:09 pm

      We love and lose and live to fight again

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  3. silvienoire

    May 17, 2012 at 1:13 am

    I read somewhere smthing v. nice “I m (still) discOVERing you”

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 17, 2012 at 1:22 am

      Nice word play.
      If only I could discover you
      Smiles

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  4. silvienoire

    May 17, 2012 at 1:27 am

    Ha, ha!!! naughty smiles! :*

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 17, 2012 at 1:49 am

      Delicious smiles, I’m sure, from those lovely lips

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  5. Ana

    May 17, 2012 at 4:12 am

    I hope, if this is from personal experience, that things are better now.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 17, 2012 at 9:11 am

      Oh it was. But thankfully a while ago. Thank you

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  6. pivoine68

    May 17, 2012 at 12:16 pm

    I’m needing to lash out myself lately.

    Bisous,
    Dawn

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 17, 2012 at 4:02 pm

      It is an acceptable strike

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  7. Isabella

    May 20, 2012 at 12:52 am

    Ouch…

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 20, 2012 at 7:32 am

      It is a bit.

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      • Isabella

        May 20, 2012 at 12:24 pm

        “Far worse than you” has quite the sting…and a “bit”…and then some after from reading this again.

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        • Romantic Dominant

          May 20, 2012 at 1:27 pm

          I know. Thankfully the woman about whom it was written never saw it.

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  8. Sofia

    May 23, 2012 at 12:50 pm

    Ouch… Vicious. Words can be so powerful.
    But I think in order to move on and away from that person one must do what certain things to heal oneself.
    Glad she never saw it.

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    • Romantic Dominant

      May 23, 2012 at 6:26 pm

      I am glad too. She was a darling submissive girl with the softest scottish accent and a bewitching smile. She didn’t deserve the poem

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      • Sofia

        May 28, 2012 at 10:29 am

        Some words are meant to be written but never seen. 🙂
        xo

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        • Romantic Dominant

          May 28, 2012 at 11:25 am

          I think so

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