Over You
She caught my eye
She’s something new.
A different dress
A different shoe.
And now I know
I’m over you.
I gave her words
Like I did with you.
A different smile
A different view.
And now I know
I’m over you.
She broke my heart
Far worse than you.
A different pain
A different blue.
And now I know
I’m over you.
Copyright: The author writing as Romantic Dominant
This is probably one of the most vicious poems I have ever written. Simple and cruel. We lash out when we are hurt …
A Faded Romantic's Notebook 
A writers strange life.
May 16, 2012 at 7:40 pm
This is sad and depressing.
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Romantic Dominant
May 16, 2012 at 7:43 pm
Yes
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eroticexploration
May 16, 2012 at 8:23 pm
Oooh very sad, stirs sorrowful memories for me too…
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Romantic Dominant
May 16, 2012 at 9:09 pm
We love and lose and live to fight again
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silvienoire
May 17, 2012 at 1:13 am
I read somewhere smthing v. nice “I m (still) discOVERing you”
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Romantic Dominant
May 17, 2012 at 1:22 am
Nice word play.
If only I could discover you
Smiles
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silvienoire
May 17, 2012 at 1:27 am
Ha, ha!!! naughty smiles! :*
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Romantic Dominant
May 17, 2012 at 1:49 am
Delicious smiles, I’m sure, from those lovely lips
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Ana
May 17, 2012 at 4:12 am
I hope, if this is from personal experience, that things are better now.
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Romantic Dominant
May 17, 2012 at 9:11 am
Oh it was. But thankfully a while ago. Thank you
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pivoine68
May 17, 2012 at 12:16 pm
I’m needing to lash out myself lately.
Bisous,
Dawn
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Romantic Dominant
May 17, 2012 at 4:02 pm
It is an acceptable strike
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Isabella
May 20, 2012 at 12:52 am
Ouch…
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Romantic Dominant
May 20, 2012 at 7:32 am
It is a bit.
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Isabella
May 20, 2012 at 12:24 pm
“Far worse than you” has quite the sting…and a “bit”…and then some after from reading this again.
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Romantic Dominant
May 20, 2012 at 1:27 pm
I know. Thankfully the woman about whom it was written never saw it.
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Isabella
May 20, 2012 at 1:28 pm
Thankfully Indeed
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Sofia
May 23, 2012 at 12:50 pm
Ouch… Vicious. Words can be so powerful.
But I think in order to move on and away from that person one must do what certain things to heal oneself.
Glad she never saw it.
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Romantic Dominant
May 23, 2012 at 6:26 pm
I am glad too. She was a darling submissive girl with the softest scottish accent and a bewitching smile. She didn’t deserve the poem
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Sofia
May 28, 2012 at 10:29 am
Some words are meant to be written but never seen. 🙂
xo
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Romantic Dominant
May 28, 2012 at 11:25 am
I think so
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